Summer breeze blusters the daisies,
tosses trees,
chases clouds,
and echoes children's laughter
while it tugs their hair.
This is written in the form of a Spanish Shadorma, poetry which has six lines lines of 3/5/3/3/7/5 syllables.
It's for bkm's Monday's Child prompt in which she gave us this picture by Florence Edith Storer.
I like this ! Thanks for visiting- and yes I used to spin, then went to felting because Cashmere wool was extremely tough ...
ReplyDeleteWell, I've learned a new poetry form today! Worth the visit. looking forward to perusing some more of your work in future.
ReplyDeleteAh that is really lovely Jinksy. Do you ever stop!
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ReplyDeleteVery interesting form! I like the flow. Lovely, insightful words as always. :)
ReplyDeleteJinksy - I just love what you've done with this prompt! ☼
ReplyDeleteOh, this feels like a fresh breeze of spring passing through me - so soothing. I love these sweet, innocent childrens' illustrations too Pen.Really beautiful little treasure of a poem.
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ReplyDeleteWhat a great take on the prompt with a wonderful poetic form.
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Nice shadorma! I think I'm starting to really like this form of poetry!
ReplyDeleteVery nice...as it tugs at their hair ....I love it...wonderful shadorma...thank you...bkm
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful scene and poem to match. Blissful childhood. Love this form and content!
ReplyDeleteShadorma is an interesting discipline - deceptively easy, I imagine.
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