...where Pen is mightier than the sword...
I like 'star cargo. There's something very appealing about the word 'cargo' - the hint of something exotic. Daft, I know!
Jabblog-As I used the word (!) I don’t think it’s daft at all! It has overtones of exotic spices and treasures being transported around the globe on romantic sail boats or steamships of long ago...
Lovely. Three lines that come together in the reader's (and, no doubt, the poet's) mind.
Perfect description of a beautiful time and place.
Dead good, Jinksy.Pamela
I don't see my post so I'll try again and hope it doesn't show up twice. This is an exquisite poem!
Really good Jinksy!Anna :o]
I like "star cargo" too--something delicate that needed transport.Lovely haiku.
Invite you to share your poetry with our poetry potluck today,Random poems, poems unrelated to our theme are welcome!Hope to see you in.Bless your talent.Cheers.xxx
the imagery is stunning.A++Thanks for linking.
So enjoy the quiet feel of nature in this: serene and peaceful!
I'm there..love when I can tag along!! lovely..
welcoming spring hmmmm wonders of the seasons!! :)http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/
Serene indeed!I loved it for its imagery.. :)(I just killed my own comment- so doing it again!)Springing Hugs xx
good job! my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/22/springtide/