14 Apr 2011

#14

 
Silk ribbon river;
moon-boat sails with star cargo,
highlights spring blossom.


For today's Freewrite at Writer's Island, as well as One Shot Wednesday.
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18 comments:

  1. jabblog14 April 2011 at 11:33

    I like 'star cargo. There's something very appealing about the word 'cargo' - the hint of something exotic. Daft, I know!

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  2. Jinksy14 April 2011 at 12:25

    Jabblog-
    As I used the word (!) I don’t think it’s daft at all! It has overtones of exotic spices and treasures being transported around the globe on romantic sail boats or steamships of long ago...

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  3. Dave King14 April 2011 at 12:29

    Lovely. Three lines that come together in the reader's (and, no doubt, the poet's) mind.

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  4. Stan Ski14 April 2011 at 15:24

    Perfect description of a beautiful time and place.

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  5. flaubert14 April 2011 at 17:24

    Dead good, Jinksy.

    Pamela

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  6. Gloria14 April 2011 at 18:01

    Simply beautiful!

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  7. Gloria14 April 2011 at 18:03

    I don't see my post so I'll try again and hope it doesn't show up twice. This is an exquisite poem!

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  8. hyperCRYPTICal14 April 2011 at 20:03

    Really good Jinksy!

    Anna :o]

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  9. ds15 April 2011 at 02:24

    I like "star cargo" too--something delicate that needed transport.
    Lovely haiku.

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  10. Anonymous18 April 2011 at 16:28

    Invite you to share your poetry with our poetry potluck today,
    Random poems, poems unrelated to our theme are welcome!

    Hope to see you in.
    Bless your talent.
    Cheers.
    xxx

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  11. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall18 April 2011 at 18:00

    the imagery is stunning.

    A++

    Thanks for linking.

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  12. Christine18 April 2011 at 19:47

    So enjoy the quiet feel of nature in this: serene and peaceful!

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  13. Lyn18 April 2011 at 21:19

    I'm there..love when I can tag along!! lovely..

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  14. Anonymous19 April 2011 at 02:25

    welcoming spring hmmmm wonders of the seasons!! :)http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/

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  15. Olivia19 April 2011 at 11:57

    Serene indeed!
    I loved it for its imagery.. :)

    (I just killed my own comment- so doing it again!)
    Springing Hugs xx

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  16. Anonymous19 April 2011 at 17:12

    lovely :)

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  17. Anonymous19 April 2011 at 19:51

    good job! my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/22/springtide/

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  18. Mia19 April 2011 at 22:15

    very beautiful!


    Luna

    http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/

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