21 Apr 2011

Gift

The locket
lent a glow of love
to her world.
Every time
she fastened its golden clasp
her lips smiled "Thank you!"

Another Shadorma for Writer's Island on Day #21.
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13 comments:

  1. Stan Ski21 April 2011 at 08:52

    Beautiful expression of gratitude.

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  2. Anonymous21 April 2011 at 08:59

    Wonderful. I have a necklace like that. I only realised it upon reading your shadorma.

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  3. Ron.21 April 2011 at 09:03

    This poem's a gift. And the artwork's lovely. salute.

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  4. vivinfrance21 April 2011 at 14:56

    Beautiful little poem. Did you draw the picture?

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  5. Elizabeth Johnson21 April 2011 at 15:24

    Lovely shadorma. One of my favorite forms... says so much but so succintly.

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  6. flaubert21 April 2011 at 16:51

    Lovely poem and picture, Jinksy.

    Pamela

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  7. imac21 April 2011 at 21:53

    You can see the pleasure it gives.

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  8. Judy Roney21 April 2011 at 22:20

    Beautiful Shadorma about a treasured object. I enjoy that form, too. The photo with it is perfect.
    http://judyidliketosay.blogspot.com/2011/04/second-thoughts.html

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  9. Judy Roney21 April 2011 at 22:42

    I had no idea that you drew the sketch yourself. This is beautiful. You are an artist in so many different forms!

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  10. Andy Sewina21 April 2011 at 23:32

    It's the little things in life that make the difference. Lovely!

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  11. Mary22 April 2011 at 03:38

    You have mastered the shadorma form. Beautiful.

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  12. Gloria22 April 2011 at 03:43

    Exquisite! I must try this form. I hope I can write something nearly as beautiful as this.

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  13. Elizabeth22 April 2011 at 19:53

    Wonderful drawing and poem expressing love and gratitude.

    Elizabeth

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