Sunday, April 10

Moonstruck

Once in a blue moon is not always right,
for the moon was bright red on the still summer night
when for the first time I found there was you.
Red and not blue.

A happy thought written in 160 characters for Monkey Man and now added to The Poetry Pantry as well.

14 comments:

  1. smiles. bright and red i bet...you do realise this could be interpretted a number of ways...smiles.

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  2. Moon obsession this weekend.. huh?
    This one is really nice.. :)

    Sunday Hugs xx

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  3. It does read like the other side of the coin!
    Mine seems to be waiting for time when I'll be able to say 'night
    when for the first time I found there was you.'

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  4. Ooh, you worked in a lot of lyrics there. Nicely done!

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  5. Must have been something in the air this weekend. There are a lot of romantic Sunday 160's today. Thanks for adding yours.

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  6. Great word play and rhythm, once more. Always a pleasure.

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  7. Red, blue, or white, I can easily see the moon taking all one's attention, especially hanging out a window.

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  8. Beautiful sentiment! I like the red/blue thoughts.

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  9. colorful and beautiful..

    enjoy your Sunday.

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  10. only the most rare meant to be's happen on a red moon :)

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  11. Once in a red moon. Nothing could be more unusual and memorable for a first meeting. :)

    http://judyidliketosay.blogspot.com/2011/04/his-gifts.html

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