Over on d'Verse - PoetsPub, Form For All highlighted Japanese poetry. Do go and read what Lady Nyo has to say on the subject, in particular this:-
"There are basically two forms of poetry in the Man’yoshu: choka (long poem, 5-7-5-7-5-7, etc. ending in 7-7) and tanka. (5-7-5-7-7)."
I have copied these characters which translate as 'Solitude', so here's my tanka inspired by that word..
Using memory
to trace my lover's outline,
I am not alone
in forsaken arms of night
when my heart seeks his loving.
hey jinksy..i didn't know you can get so romantic..smiles...enjoyed it - forsaken arms of night..tracing the lover's outlines...very nice..
ReplyDeletehow haunting and sad.. love the nostalgia
ReplyDeleteLove the heart seeking his loving:)
ReplyDeleteVery romantic. Hopefully it is just a short vacation.
ReplyDeleteLovely, Jinksy. These forms seemed to bring out the romantic in us all.
ReplyDeleteVery romantic, lovely!
ReplyDeleteI know and understand that longing and loneliness. When one has lost the one he/she loves memories must suffice in both remembered warmth and through the emptiness. Well done.
ReplyDeleteWow!!! wow!!! wow!!!
ReplyDeleteI feel the longing here.
ReplyDeleteBrilliantly done!
beautiful..
ReplyDeletetruly beautiful - both in style and theme
ReplyDeletewow,
ReplyDeletewhat romantic yearning,
this is charming and smiling piece of poetry.
Beautiful and sad :-(
ReplyDeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteLove this delicately beautiful piece! The kanji are a nice touch. :)
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