Reverie
The lady dreamed about her love
no appetite had she;
a meal, untouched upon her plate,
lay there for all to see.
Her reverie had brought to mind
an earlier, far off day
when Nicholas had brought a lute
and Father told him "Play!"
Sweet music touched her maiden-heart,
she fell beneath its spell,
but she'd been promised to a lord -
Nick was a ne'er do well.
"But father dear, I beg, I pray!
I do not love this man.
Lord Jasper's not the one I want!
Forgive me, if you can?"
Her Father, being wise and kind,
was minded to relent.
"If this be true, young Nicholas
must prove his good intent."
"I'll give to him a bag of gold
and if, in one year hence,
his efforts have increased its worth,
I'll grant he must have sense
enough to work for what he wants,
and you and he shall marry."
"Oh, Father dear, I'll gladly wait.
But ask him not to tarry!"
For the full picture, you need to go to Magpie Tales! Thanks, Tess.
Good tale-telling.
ReplyDelete. . and told in the "ballad" style of the time. Good idea to concentrate on one of the many elements in the picture.
ReplyDeleteWhat a fine 'singled-out' tale!
ReplyDeleteThat lute is coming over, loud and clear, in this one, Jinksy.
ReplyDeletegreat music, with a touch of mother goose
ReplyDeleteYes, I agree this is a song lyric! Lovely rhyme and metre!
ReplyDeleteExcellent! Wow, this is really wonderful Penny...
ReplyDeleteYou pulled off a happy ending.
ReplyDeleteOpen your mouth and wonderful words fall out.lol.
ReplyDeleteBrill.
Another great Jinksy take!
ReplyDeleteYou are a master of story telling and rhythmic flow...great job start to finish. you are a very skilled rhymer. Vb
ReplyDeleteGreat story - I think this is one of my faves from you :)
ReplyDeletethis was a sweet tale!
ReplyDeleteIt has an authentic feel.
ReplyDeleteOh This is great! I love how you isolated the girl and her pensive glance.
ReplyDeleteI like the jolly way the poem bounces along - it reminded me of all those tales I read as a child.
ReplyDeleteLovely story poem!
ReplyDeleteBut will he return? I hope her heart will not be broken.
ReplyDeleteLeaping ahead...how did he do? Waiting, the damsel's fate, alas! This had an authentic feel!
ReplyDeleteA rollicking, rolling rhythmical Magpie. Love how you cropped the photo and concentrated on the lovely lady.
ReplyDeleteI wonder if they'll see Nicholas again? Nice Mag.
ReplyDeleteA clever and well written tale. Really enjoyed reading this one!
ReplyDeleteAnother lovely tale, I'm so glad she went with the
ReplyDelete'ne'er do well.'
Lovely tale for sure!!
ReplyDeleteHugs
SueAnn
I took a peek at your poem on Monday but haven't yet seen any others. I've been tangled up in another project. I like the blue dress (clearly a blue girl) better than the painter's original black dress as shown in Wikipedia. Dissension in the club is palpable as you have discerned. Your take could be as close as any other of the umpteen reasons families and friends are at odds.Great Magpie!
ReplyDeleteExcellent Jinksy!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Perfect!
ReplyDeleteA lovely ballad with my morning tea. Good stuff!
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThis is well organized, syncopated and nicely meaning all the way through. That girl is indeed worried, for sure. Good job.
ReplyDeleteLoved it Jinksy .. the rhythmic ebb and flow of romance! Well done. Hope she gets her man.
ReplyDeleteNolw that the photo has been cropped, it is clear her platter is empty. Yhe yet to be dismembered chook is on the centre doiley and is therefore probably the second course.
ReplyDeleteBUT all that does not diminish the exellent poem or its story!
Now that's clearly a singularly awesome take on the prompt...
ReplyDeleteWell narrated, Jinksy!
I hope Nick succeeds... (sigh)...
A great story perfectly done!
ReplyDeleteWhat a playful ballad, and a Medieval tale with a potentially happy ending (though I suspect with bag of gold under his arm, this is the last we'll see of Nick!)
ReplyDeleteWonderful. A lovely story and even a lute - how much better can a ballad get?! 8-)
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