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| by Penny Smith |
Water-world
imagination
paints colours
in cool shades
to fill fevered hearts and minds
with serenity.
imagination
paints colours
in cool shades
to fill fevered hearts and minds
with serenity.
This is a shadorma I've written for In Tandem #6, a syllabic verse of 3/5/3/3/7/5 over six lines. I've also linked it to The Poetry Pantry.
Most lovely!
ReplyDeleteYes - its a cool number.
ReplyDeleteWell matched to the art piece. I tried the shadorma once or twice but just couldn't get things to flow properly.
ReplyDeletePerfect!
ReplyDeleteSerenity I could do with, after the day I've had.
ReplyDeletePerfectly matched shadorma. Seems to address your unrest there in England - fevered hearts indeed.
ReplyDeleteI love that form but have composed too many lately so I'm trying another sonnet this week for Tandem.
Lovely, Penny, but you overlooked the dark areas of your painting.
ReplyDeletefirst time i heard of that form...but what a lovely write.
ReplyDeleteCool indeed.
ReplyDeleteNice Jinksy, but I have not heard of that form got to think about it. I could not get into Jingle Poetry did I miss something? It says I am not invited.
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