teeming lives hidden;
close packed doors
challenge people's privacy
with tight juxtaposition.
This is my shadorma, written for Neil Alexanders's photo as featured on One Stop Poetry's Challenge today.
For those who are unfamiliar with this form, it consists of six syllabic lines, 3/5/3/3/7/7, and I particularly like it as an accompaniment to photographs.
Oops! Just realised that should have been 3/5/3/3/7/5 - sorry, people!