21 Dec 2010
Starlight Express?
Or Weaver's Poetry Bus for the week? For a ticket, passengers were asked to take the word 'STAR' for their inspiration. I'm cheating. Many years ago, I was walking home after a long drawn out, quartet singing session at a neighbour's house, and the following lines were the result, so my ticket is well thumbed already!
2 a.m.
Clear night sky;
frost filled moonlight
cutting cold across the land.
Sounds are honed
to a knife-sharp fineness
by the icy, silent air. Stars,
bright as polished steel,
blaze white hot
through light year distances,
linking Earth to Infinity.
The sudden, brilliant arc
of a falling meteorite
underlines their beauty
and marks a point of no return.
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2 a.m.? What a stop-out you are, Jinksy! But that cold night air obviously sharpened your perception. Great images.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy the sound of this poem and its effect to reinforce the cold brightness.
ReplyDeletePoint of no return- is right! infinity
ReplyDeleteindeed-Thanks.
Really liked the earth to infinity idea. Sounds like a night to remember!
ReplyDelete'linking Earth to Infinity'
ReplyDeletehmm, love that
Lovely alliteration, every word carefully chosen and a very deep message. Brilliant!
ReplyDeleteinhale deep breath. . . exhale. . . AAhhhh at the wonder of it all!
ReplyDeleteSharp, arresting images, Jinksy.
ReplyDeleteThis is gorgeous! I love this image: "Stars,
ReplyDeletebright as polished steel," and the linking to infinity. Beautifully worded and well worth pulling out of the archives!
Boy, sounds ARE sharper outside that time of night - really, unless I'm exhausted, everything is. Great poem!
ReplyDelete"Linking earth to infinity...", BRILLIANT! LOVE it!!
ReplyDeleteI am always amazed at how loud the quiet is in the middle of the night!
ReplyDeleteWonderful word picture of a crisp, starlit night.
ReplyDeleteWhat everybody said about the gorgeous line "linking earth to infinity". Lovely!
ReplyDeleteGlorious poem!
ReplyDeleteI just came by to (finally) read your Magpie and saw this first. Am glad I didn't miss this one!
Spare and stark and I could feel the cold!
ReplyDeleteexcellent...i love watching the night sky...even on a cold night...
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