25 Oct 2010

Microfiction Monday # 54

The boys were hoping to acquire a tan to cover their naked torsos while scoffing beer and sandwiches. Fat chance!


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19 comments:

  1. Excellent response. I'm full of admiration.

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  2. NAKED TORSOS! WOW!--grin...

    That's me, sitting in back wearing a shirt! Derm-Doc says "Do NOT sit in the sun!" So I stand in it sometimes.

    Jinksy, thanks for asking me to post doubly--that's 'also' on "Monday's Child". It is the first time that I've been FIRST in 28 months of blogging here!!!

    I love you use of the word in "FAT" chance!!!

    PEACE!
    Steve E

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  3. Hmmm, tan- there's a scary idea! I'm familiar with these misfits- Thanks!

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  4. It may be unsuccessful but it's certainly fun trying ;-)
    Nice one.

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  5. Well at least one of them could use the meal. :) Nice one.

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  6. Covering up would be for the best.
    Nice on!
    ...and now there are 41

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  7. They definitely need all the help they can get! Covering up would help! Fun one for the day! Hope you have a great week!

    Sylvia

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  8. That's a great one for today's prompt. Fun!

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  9. Love it! Fat chance indeed... ;)

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  10. They should move far from the tree so as not to blind the others and to tan. Cute and clever story!

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  11. I just love "Fat chance"!! Good take on it. I'm not allowed to sit in the sun, either, so I'm glad there's a tree.

    Kay, Alberta

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  12. I think they need MORE than just a tan to help them out, the poor dears...
    Funny one this week. Thanks for sharing. Cheers!

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  13. I think it is going to be a Summer of Picnic's and Beer to get that Atlas like Tan.

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  14. Naked torso and fat chance? Nice!

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