27 Feb 2011

Short One For Sunday

At sunset, trees settle down for the night,
silhouettes darkened against the light
of a fireball brazier there in the sky
which overspills gold, for you and I.



  
Completed in 160 characters as Monkey Man requests!
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8 comments:

  1. jabblog27 February 2011 at 15:29

    I like the 'fireball brazier' - very evocative!

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  2. Anonymous27 February 2011 at 15:47

    Lovely description of a sunset.

    - Alice

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  3. Brian Miller27 February 2011 at 16:00

    smiles...sounds like a bit of treasure...for you an i...

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  4. avoid the clap27 February 2011 at 17:11

    I like that you made us part of the poem. I like a little "you and I" every now and again.

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  5. avoid the clap27 February 2011 at 17:48

    [Thanks for your comment on my blog! In response, I should tell you that The Clap, is a slang for a particular disease, not simply applause. Hence the tagline for my blog! I hope that won't deter you from reading!]

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  6. Monkey Man27 February 2011 at 19:50

    Great flow and beautifully sculpted images. Thanks for playing along with the Sunday 160.

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  7. imac27 February 2011 at 20:10

    Its a beaut my friend.

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  8. Pat28 February 2011 at 01:15

    Creative poem for the sunset!

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