Locked Out
Rusted metal: a missing key:
both keep you away from me,
O treasured keepsakes, in a box
which time imprisons with its locks
on memory. No longer keen,
this dwells upon those things unseen
for many moons. Have I forgot?
Do I dream of what was not,
in mis-remembered pastel haze
of those distant glory days?
An ode to frustration?
ReplyDeletethis is beautiful
ReplyDeletelove the imagery in the 1st line
also the term 'mis-remembered pastel haze' is fantastic!
I love the last three lines!
ReplyDeletenice...i like the line on 'mis remembered pastel haze'...hope you find your keys. smiles.
ReplyDeleteUse a knife!
ReplyDeleteI'm sure we are guilty of mis-remembering. Sometimes that pastel haze is rose-coloured!
ReplyDeleteWe are locked in trying to be locked out..
ReplyDeleteThis made me think...
timeless flies search for fries
I highly doubt you forgot! Nice write. Love and Light, Sender
ReplyDeleteBottom level, the cornerstone reason I keep a journal, because I knew that someday I might face this reality, when the gift of recall would begin to loose its preciseness. Only to discover that denial is always present.
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
Is the truth or the memory of the truth mire important? Here's my Friday 55. Hope your week goes well
ReplyDeleteHere's another. There's two of you who have done this well this time with rhymes and pacing so that everything is quintessential rhymed poesy. Look what you went and made me do-->
ReplyDeleteWho Knows What's What
When you tell of us
in those long ago places
and times, you tell it
so different that
I have to wonder what's up.
Either you have it
wrong or I twisted
things my own way. I don't know.
You or me, sister.
memory does skew our experience, doesn't it! great job with this, including your rhymes!
ReplyDeletememories are priceless... especially for those who have none and make up as they go along...
ReplyDeleteAh, well said! Delightful read - provocative, for sure.
ReplyDeleteindeed well done...made me think also
ReplyDeleteMy middle-aged mind thinks it is your locked box.
ReplyDeleteNicely done!
Memories are so precious.
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