Sunday, February 27

Short One For Sunday

At sunset, trees settle down for the night,
silhouettes darkened against the light
of a fireball brazier there in the sky
which overspills gold, for you and I.



  
Completed in 160 characters as Monkey Man requests!

8 comments:

  1. I like the 'fireball brazier' - very evocative!

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  2. smiles...sounds like a bit of treasure...for you an i...

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  3. I like that you made us part of the poem. I like a little "you and I" every now and again.

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  4. [Thanks for your comment on my blog! In response, I should tell you that The Clap, is a slang for a particular disease, not simply applause. Hence the tagline for my blog! I hope that won't deter you from reading!]

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  5. Great flow and beautifully sculpted images. Thanks for playing along with the Sunday 160.

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  6. Creative poem for the sunset!

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