3 May 2014

At The Going Down Of The Sun

Original Image by Penny Smith
Stillness spreads
over the landscape
as evening
stands poised on the horizon
   of another day.

An edit of something I wrote earlier, updated and posted for Poetry Jam.
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7 comments:

  1. Laurie Kolp3 May 2014 at 15:35

    Beautiful, Jinksy! I love the idea of the evening poised.

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  2. Sarav3 May 2014 at 15:53

    This is lovely! And I agree with Laurie that image really enchanted me :-)

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  3. Helen3 May 2014 at 15:58

    Penny, your poem and painting are enchanting!

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  4. Susan Lindquist3 May 2014 at 16:00

    I'm with Laurie. I love the wording 'evening stands poised on the horizon' - it's perfect.

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  5. Anonymous3 May 2014 at 18:38

    Perfect ~

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  6. Sumana Roy4 May 2014 at 09:11

    'evening stands poised' perfectly describes the sundown...wonderful lines :)

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  7. Intelliblog7 May 2014 at 05:21

    This is the sort of feeling one gets when looking at the Eastern horizon during sunset! Lovely...

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