31 Jan 2011

We're All In A Lather !

Bosun Bob and Barnacle Bill
though shipwrecked on a shore
knew they'd be, for good or ill,
squeaky clean for life, buoys - er - boys!

From Dover Publication's free sample newsletter, which was Stony River's prompt for her Microfiction Monday #68.

20 comments:

  1. Excellent! Very clever :O)

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  2. The boys certainly look happy!

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  3. They certainly are excited! good one- Thanks.

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  4. Soap doesn't lather well in salt water . . .

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  5. LOL Oh very clever Jinksy, very clever indeed. :)

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  6. These two could do a great commercial for lifebouy soap! Nice take!

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  7. What a terrific, fun take for the day! Yep, great commercial in the making! Enjoy your week!

    Sylvia

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  8. "Squeaky clean for life, boys!" I love it.
    -- K

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

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  9. They do look like they just got the best gift! Great job!

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  10. Cute poem and such a fun take on the image.

    Thanks for stopping by my blog.

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  11. Wonderful poem for this pic! Just had to smile when I read it.
    :)

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  12. Very fun take on the illustration. Loved it!

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  13. Clever! Love the wordplay at the end. :)

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  14. Lovely little sea shanty you have there...

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  15. Always come clean, LOL.

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