Bosun Bob and Barnacle Bill
though shipwrecked on a shore
knew they'd be, for good or ill,
squeaky clean for life, buoys - er - boys!
From Dover Publication's free sample newsletter, which was Stony River's prompt for her Microfiction Monday #68.
Excellent! Very clever :O)
ReplyDeleteThe boys certainly look happy!
ReplyDeleteTop drawer stuff!
ReplyDeleteThey certainly are excited! good one- Thanks.
ReplyDeleteSoap doesn't lather well in salt water . . .
ReplyDeletewell done
ReplyDeletelove the names
LOL Oh very clever Jinksy, very clever indeed. :)
ReplyDeleteThat's a proper poem!
ReplyDeleteThese two could do a great commercial for lifebouy soap! Nice take!
ReplyDeleteWhat a terrific, fun take for the day! Yep, great commercial in the making! Enjoy your week!
ReplyDeleteSylvia
"Squeaky clean for life, boys!" I love it.
ReplyDelete-- K
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
They do look like they just got the best gift! Great job!
ReplyDeleteCute poem and such a fun take on the image.
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by my blog.
Wonderful poem for this pic! Just had to smile when I read it.
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Very fun take on the illustration. Loved it!
ReplyDeleteClever! Love the wordplay at the end. :)
ReplyDeleteCute! Love it! Thanks for participating. :)
ReplyDelete¸.•´♥Elizabeth
Very clever indeed!
ReplyDeleteLovely little sea shanty you have there...
ReplyDeleteAlways come clean, LOL.
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