Something may occur to me later in the week, in which case I shall add it here. ** (see below!)
In the meantime, I give you the progression of thought pictures which lead to the totally abstract, final offering, where everything has turned upside down, as that way, the colours suggested to me a lightening of the spirit as an escape from the menial tasks of working in the fields.
** I'd hardly clicked on the 'publish' button, when my mind took over from my fingers, and there was this shadorma, waiting to appear. Possibly the act of not thinking, allowed the new thoughts in!
Spirits lift
towards the heavensand burdens
grow lighter
as the mind refocuses
in meditation.
Oh yes burdens do lighten as we raise our thoughts and feelings toward heaven! great job thanks.
ReplyDeleteWhat fun!! I went a completely opposite direction! Ha
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SUeAnn
Cor! Heaven forbid......what a final picture that is! That'd be fun to stare at after a heavy night out!!
ReplyDeleteAmazing transformation from the original! I guess you just needed the time thinking on other aspects for you brain to connect with the written response ... very nice, indeed!
ReplyDeleteI saw her spirit as dreaming of escape, too. The colour progression is gorgeous. I especially like the second one ...caught in the moment of release!
ReplyDeleteThese pictures remind me a bit of those geo stones. Very cool!
ReplyDeletemeditation...ah! t o be lost in another world
ReplyDeleteI like your poem, Jinks. It is a story of hope, hope for those who toil for very little.
ReplyDeleteTo me from the original it seemed she might have been a gleaner as there doesn't seem much crop left up for grabs:
I've little
to gain in my life
pittances
come my way
family to feed always
nourishes my soul
This is the perfect accompaniment to the central image, Jinksy.
ReplyDeleteBright images and "spirits lift" made this an uplifting post!
ReplyDeleteOnly with myopic eyes can we see the real truth,,,
ReplyDeleteCool.....lines are perfect.....
ReplyDeletea fitting mantra, as it were ~
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