23 Jun 2013

Burning Desire

If a chap says "Will you light my fire?"
I'd hope that his thoughts would range higher
than a flame for a fag -
I don't like to nag,
but effects from such smoke can be dire!

Written for Tess and her Mag 174 with apologies to Stanley Kubrick.
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21 comments:

  1. Tess Kincaid23 June 2013 at 17:00

    Come on baby light my fire...

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    1. Anonymous28 June 2013 at 01:51

      Thinking on the same plane as Tess! Love this.

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  2. ds23 June 2013 at 17:40

    Ha ha! Nice!

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  3. Berowne23 June 2013 at 18:53

    Smart and nimble; well done.

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  4. Laurie Kolp23 June 2013 at 20:33

    Cute!

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  5. ninotaziz23 June 2013 at 21:39

    Jinsky dear, love the thought!

    Maybe he could not think of anything else...

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  6. Lyn23 June 2013 at 22:10

    So clever..and true!! Good combo!

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  7. Nana Jo24 June 2013 at 00:58

    ...and then who knows what may transpire! Very clever, Jinksy. I really like what you did with the photo, too.

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  8. Michael24 June 2013 at 08:08

    hahahahhaa. surgeon general approved

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  9. Sueann24 June 2013 at 10:20

    That is so true......
    Hugs
    SueAnn

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  10. kaykuala24 June 2013 at 11:31

    Hilarious Jinsky! Great limericks! A twist from the normal verses.

    Hank

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  11. Silent Otto 24 June 2013 at 13:32

    Is this about the night out in London nightclub youhad with Jim Morrison ?

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  12. Kathe W.24 June 2013 at 15:18

    excellent! Clever image and lines!

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  13. Helen24 June 2013 at 15:59

    Love the flash of flame .. and your poem! (hope you added this to The Toads & Jim Morrison challenge)

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  14. jabblog24 June 2013 at 17:26

    Any kind of fire can lead to unexpected consequences;-)

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  15. Maude Lynn24 June 2013 at 18:54

    I immediately thought of the song, too!

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  16. Other Mary25 June 2013 at 03:22

    Heehee - nice one. I though of The Doors too!

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  17. Ella25 June 2013 at 15:36

    Very clever Penny!
    I love too how you changed up the photo
    and made your words come to light ;D

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  18. Helena25 June 2013 at 21:55

    Certainly sparked up a giggle with me!!

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  19. Unknown26 June 2013 at 10:33

    I like how you brought the focus straight to the light!

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  20. Susan Anderson26 June 2013 at 18:11

    haha

    you are always a clever one

    =)

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