Sunday, June 23

Burning Desire

If a chap says "Will you light my fire?"
I'd hope that his thoughts would range higher
than a flame for a fag -
I don't like to nag,
but effects from such smoke can be dire!

Written for Tess and her Mag 174 with apologies to Stanley Kubrick.

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    1. Thinking on the same plane as Tess! Love this.

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  2. Smart and nimble; well done.

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  3. Jinsky dear, love the thought!

    Maybe he could not think of anything else...

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  4. So clever..and true!! Good combo!

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  5. ...and then who knows what may transpire! Very clever, Jinksy. I really like what you did with the photo, too.

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  6. hahahahhaa. surgeon general approved

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  7. That is so true......
    Hugs
    SueAnn

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  8. Hilarious Jinsky! Great limericks! A twist from the normal verses.

    Hank

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  9. Is this about the night out in London nightclub youhad with Jim Morrison ?

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  10. excellent! Clever image and lines!

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  11. Love the flash of flame .. and your poem! (hope you added this to The Toads & Jim Morrison challenge)

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  12. Any kind of fire can lead to unexpected consequences;-)

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  13. I immediately thought of the song, too!

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  14. Heehee - nice one. I though of The Doors too!

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  15. Very clever Penny!
    I love too how you changed up the photo
    and made your words come to light ;D

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  16. Certainly sparked up a giggle with me!!

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  17. I like how you brought the focus straight to the light!

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  18. haha

    you are always a clever one

    =)

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