The painting was huge.
Once unveiled, the scale of it
could fool the senses
into believing they saw
a steel and concrete town-scape;
dark-glass reflections
creating strange images
of alien things
hovering just out of sight
behind a wire forest.
Written for Mag 228, with thanks to Tess and the un-named photographer.
P.S. Though it may look like random line breaks, I've actually used two of the Tanka, five line, 5/7/5/7/7 syllable count.
realy nice Jinksy. Im yet to see a painting of this sort :)
ReplyDeleteLovely - and I loved what you did with the photo!
ReplyDeleteQuite an innovative response to the prompt...
ReplyDeleteoh Jinksy- you are so smart! Wonderful take on this weeks image!
ReplyDeleteI like this journey, and I shall beware of the wire forest!
ReplyDeleteOne of those buildings with lifts, so the staircases have been removed? Great imagery and image manipulation.
ReplyDeleteI agree with the Doctor - I love what you've done with the picture.
ReplyDeleteWonderful tanka Jinsky! Aptly related to the pic! Great!
ReplyDeleteHank
You put such a Jinksy take on it - so clever - I had to look hard to see how your picture related to the prompt and then I saw it :)
ReplyDeleteIt has a Jackson Pollock feel to it. Minus the price tag.
ReplyDeleteCool colours, cool edit, cool piece. Another fine Jinksy creation!
ReplyDeleteExcellent!
ReplyDeleteAlways an interesting twist...
ReplyDeleteits so innovative..........
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