Pocketed
Red
shiny
snooker balls
cluster tightly
in a triangle.
Like ripe, juicy cherries
sitting plump on green baize ground
they wait for the game to commence.
Cannoning cue ball brakes formation;
one red sphere rolls to meet its destiny.
And as a two for one, special opening offer, here is a rhymed, double etheree to make you start to think of doing one yourself.
The Answer Is No
No
stalling;
rhyme’s calling,
begging my brain
to start work again
on yet another set
of rhyming couplets. So let
battle commence! Get brain in gear
choose words to make the enemy fear
the lash of tongue or mental cut and thrust
designed to conquer, though that be unjust
in what should be a friendly skirmish.
May each foray end as I wish
in compatible joining
of like with like, bringing
harmony to all.
forget the call
to arms. Smile!
Worthwhile,
No?
stalling;
rhyme’s calling,
begging my brain
to start work again
on yet another set
of rhyming couplets. So let
battle commence! Get brain in gear
choose words to make the enemy fear
the lash of tongue or mental cut and thrust
designed to conquer, though that be unjust
in what should be a friendly skirmish.
May each foray end as I wish
in compatible joining
of like with like, bringing
harmony to all.
forget the call
to arms. Smile!
Worthwhile,
No?
YES! YesYes.
ReplyDeleteRemind me not to ask questions...
ReplyDeleteDear Pen,
ReplyDeletewonderful! Love it! I'll press the follower-button instantly!
wonderful! that first poem, i tried to read it out loud - and with my german accent it is a tonguebreaker…had a good laugh about myself…smiles
ReplyDeleteHey friehd, Love your new blog, you have a way with words.
ReplyDeleteas far as I am concerned you are on to a good thing here, have fun and i will be along often. (btw, can you send me tessa's snail mail address please...jossross@yahoo.com)
ReplyDeleteThank you for the poetry. Blow little seeds into the summer wind! Lovely blog.
ReplyDeleteThis was a special opening Bonanza...
ReplyDelete:D Loved it...
Keep weaving those wonderful words your way...
boom shakalakka lakka boom shakka lakka lakka......
ReplyDeleteI's down wit dis my sista !!!!!
LOL!!!!!!
Intriguing form. Better than a fibonacci, where the lines get too long. I'm off to try one.
ReplyDeleteWonderful to have you in the blogging world! This poem is terrific..not a form I know, so I will definitley have to give it a try...
ReplyDeleteSo glad you stopped by my place and left a lovely message, so that I might find your page. I'll be back soon...:)
Lynette