tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post3993513425215359967..comments2024-03-08T11:49:58.622+00:00Comments on Alias Jinksy: Reflected LightJinksyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-29546105839720022752012-12-20T06:15:42.122+00:002012-12-20T06:15:42.122+00:00atmospheric with a wealth of tangible feelingatmospheric with a wealth of tangible feelingChris Lawrencehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12082462583986448559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-85914172868767159492012-12-19T11:35:41.149+00:002012-12-19T11:35:41.149+00:00love your use of the repetition, Pen. wonderful vi...love your use of the repetition, Pen. wonderful villanelle!<br /><br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-85513097890095900732012-12-19T09:45:00.830+00:002012-12-19T09:45:00.830+00:00A triumph this, Jinksy, from the negative to the v...A triumph this, Jinksy, from the negative to the villanelle, beautiful.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-6913219378199459872012-12-18T17:25:35.523+00:002012-12-18T17:25:35.523+00:00A magical write Jinksy!! :-)A magical write Jinksy!! :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-32200904244709358252012-12-18T08:58:33.421+00:002012-12-18T08:58:33.421+00:00A truly excellent write Jinksy. It is indeed wond...A truly excellent write Jinksy. It is indeed wonderful!<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-29610348293735878292012-12-18T01:04:41.311+00:002012-12-18T01:04:41.311+00:00Fantastic. I don't often care for form poetry,...Fantastic. I don't often care for form poetry, but this is wonderful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-5772908027911926692012-12-17T21:42:30.923+00:002012-12-17T21:42:30.923+00:00Brilliant! (I'll even forgive you for cheating...Brilliant! (I'll even forgive you for cheating. I never saw any snow...?)Frances Garroodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10614916006798375706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-47868722816919189512012-12-17T20:46:45.249+00:002012-12-17T20:46:45.249+00:00Beautifully done, Jinksy. Like Kerry, I love the l...Beautifully done, Jinksy. Like Kerry, I love the last two lines.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-25550586904672518752012-12-17T20:06:56.615+00:002012-12-17T20:06:56.615+00:00Jinksy, this is an amazing villanelle - it flows s...Jinksy, this is an amazing villanelle - it flows so naturally from one stanza to the next, and there is a stoic sense of serenity of mood. The repeated lines are so beautiful. They will stay with me for a long time.<br /><br />..remember how this winter day gave light;<br />it held at bay the terrors of the night.<br /><br />Perfect.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-55431380604814749532012-12-17T20:05:45.917+00:002012-12-17T20:05:45.917+00:00Thank you for this repetition induced memory that ...Thank you for this repetition induced memory that all will be ok.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-60404564083173101522012-12-17T17:42:20.166+00:002012-12-17T17:42:20.166+00:00Very tight writing. I love the repetition in this ...Very tight writing. I love the repetition in this form, which you have made use of flawlessly. Wonderful to read!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-11155044080871964272012-12-17T16:45:08.331+00:002012-12-17T16:45:08.331+00:00Amazing! I love how you remind us to remember~Amazing! I love how you remind us to remember~Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-59682251486658815942012-12-17T16:05:01.085+00:002012-12-17T16:05:01.085+00:00One of your finest ....One of your finest ....Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-86910571243994221512012-12-17T16:02:29.221+00:002012-12-17T16:02:29.221+00:00How beautiful!How beautiful!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-26043239240453391762012-12-17T15:54:05.157+00:002012-12-17T15:54:05.157+00:00I love the way that form reads, and this one was m...I love the way that form reads, and this one was mercurial in its flow and hushed in its tone and questioning. Made it hopeful ic the clouds should lift for a moment. Great writing.Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-8344222095657593232012-12-17T15:07:57.154+00:002012-12-17T15:07:57.154+00:00I like the echoing words of the winter's light...I like the echoing words of the winter's light ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-78870483666140375722012-12-17T14:15:35.382+00:002012-12-17T14:15:35.382+00:00..this week 's really changed... and leaves an.....this week 's really changed... and leaves an impression of deep silence ... smiles...kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-29780575554753026912012-12-17T14:12:37.766+00:002012-12-17T14:12:37.766+00:00I love the mantra quality of your villanelle! So ...I love the mantra quality of your villanelle! So soothing and peaceful almost a prayer or a plea! Thanks for sharing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-1955833317432294782012-12-17T14:04:39.931+00:002012-12-17T14:04:39.931+00:00..ah, def write...and truly fascinating...your ver.....ah, def write...and truly fascinating...your version of the image this kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-71806965746800252122012-12-17T12:54:26.564+00:002012-12-17T12:54:26.564+00:00Marvelous... love your version of the picture, Jin...Marvelous... love your version of the picture, Jinksy... Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-11905037072299197442012-12-17T12:27:11.180+00:002012-12-17T12:27:11.180+00:00What a wonderful read! Flowing, this piece soothes...What a wonderful read! Flowing, this piece soothes the reader, like a lullaby. One of my favorites of the week.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-74543484024622823802012-12-17T12:02:16.790+00:002012-12-17T12:02:16.790+00:00the refrains work beautifully to sustain the mood....the refrains work beautifully to sustain the mood.wonderfully done.and the simplicity of the lines makes them resonate with so many meanings!Abin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-84623959244578936742012-12-17T11:00:29.836+00:002012-12-17T11:00:29.836+00:00A little negative :-)
turned back to positive
pos...A little negative :-) <br />turned back to positive<br />possible to absorb the negative <br />on our behalf?Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-87478593309073560752012-12-17T08:13:05.328+00:002012-12-17T08:13:05.328+00:00Love and light work miracles... :)Love and light work miracles... :)Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-627520148473473092012-12-17T07:55:30.323+00:002012-12-17T07:55:30.323+00:00Absolutely not, m'dear! But the mountains alte...Absolutely not, m'dear! But the mountains alter perspective. :)Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.com