tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post1853383929206428402..comments2024-03-08T11:49:58.622+00:00Comments on Alias Jinksy: Big Tent Poetry Prompt - Come One Come All 10 Sep + A 55 for G-ManJinksyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-20130997413158640692010-09-12T18:35:04.511+01:002010-09-12T18:35:04.511+01:00The volcanic anger imagery hardly needed all 55 w...The volcanic anger imagery hardly needed all 55 words!Doctor FTSEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10052101566471519778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-21243572438159790892010-09-12T16:17:22.932+01:002010-09-12T16:17:22.932+01:00Thanks for steering me here -- fun place!Thanks for steering me here -- fun place!Merihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07024443046207501650noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-10769077259903668092010-09-11T22:37:34.200+01:002010-09-11T22:37:34.200+01:00well plotted 55.
love it.
Happy Belated Friday!
...well plotted 55.<br />love it.<br />Happy Belated Friday!<br /><br /> <br /><a href="http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/09/55-if-u-r-wall.html" rel="nofollow">my 55</a>Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-50064451836012212882010-09-11T15:58:19.990+01:002010-09-11T15:58:19.990+01:00Wonderful haiku, and your descriptive paragraph on...Wonderful haiku, and your descriptive paragraph on argument was so real and true...Cynthia Shorthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12386358503730817278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-40428669765702809832010-09-11T04:09:32.994+01:002010-09-11T04:09:32.994+01:00Thanks for this, Jinksy. I like the combo, one-two...Thanks for this, Jinksy. I like the combo, one-two. Pow.Debhttp://stoneymoss.org/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-84636242352195368462010-09-11T03:18:44.328+01:002010-09-11T03:18:44.328+01:00Oh yes, when you keep anger inside, it errupts lik...Oh yes, when you keep anger inside, it errupts like a volcana. Very nicely written. Have a great weekend. <br /><br /><a href="http://krazyblonde-kb.blogspot.com/2010/09/flash-55-quake-zone.html" rel="nofollow">My 55 is here</a>.KBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02621937316200868307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-91144973480487573922010-09-11T03:02:53.133+01:002010-09-11T03:02:53.133+01:00To the point! Loved it.
crooked windowTo the point! Loved it.<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/09/crooked-window.html" rel="nofollow">crooked window</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-77008313238712427272010-09-10T21:52:28.152+01:002010-09-10T21:52:28.152+01:00Great content - great comments - looks like a lot ...Great content - great comments - looks like a lot of 'I shoulda saids' going on here - what fun.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-58870847264770255582010-09-10T21:08:31.036+01:002010-09-10T21:08:31.036+01:00Ilike both the poem and the prose! Well done!Ilike both the poem and the prose! Well done!Diane Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-44329360806597893892010-09-10T20:16:38.347+01:002010-09-10T20:16:38.347+01:00I like both the poem and the prose, but got a bit ...I like both the poem and the prose, but got a bit waylaid by the comments. It seemed to take forever to get here, lol, but all rather interesting. <br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2010/09/10/in-one-word/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-22384089563899748742010-09-10T19:52:49.111+01:002010-09-10T19:52:49.111+01:00Mona- Luckily, I’ve never ever been angry like my ...Mona- Luckily, I’ve never ever been angry like my 55! My imagination, and love of words were the inventors in this case, but I agree, there are occasions when anger can be positive. I like justice, and if I see anyone being treated unjustly, I get angry on their behalf, which gives me the impetus to sort things, if at all possible. So I totally agree with your sensible view of the subject.Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-59675075984151673682010-09-10T19:41:46.746+01:002010-09-10T19:41:46.746+01:00Anger can be both harmful, or useful, depending up...Anger can be both harmful, or useful, depending upon what direction you give it! It is pure wild energy which is negative, and which can be transformed to giving positive results!Monahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08615034229525061880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-81366467241159747932010-09-10T19:30:52.219+01:002010-09-10T19:30:52.219+01:00Very well done my friend. I like the last line of ...Very well done my friend. I like the last line of this the best. Excellent. Have a great weekend :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-58177314413971091012010-09-10T19:26:42.598+01:002010-09-10T19:26:42.598+01:00Love the volcano metaphor. I'm up this week as...Love the volcano metaphor. I'm up this week as well.Monkey Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06741294113777908130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-80873754389129258722010-09-10T18:52:52.816+01:002010-09-10T18:52:52.816+01:00As usual, your 55 is well thought-out and intuitiv...As usual, your 55 is well thought-out and intuitive, Jinksy! Have a great weekend!Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-37768384103421207242010-09-10T16:41:22.356+01:002010-09-10T16:41:22.356+01:00Wow! What a powerful observation on such a negativ...Wow! What a powerful observation on such a negative, destroying emotion! Well Done!<br /><br />My 55 is up - bring some sugar for the horses! lol!mrsnesbitthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16882736507772457598noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-15427127667586175692010-09-10T16:04:52.033+01:002010-09-10T16:04:52.033+01:00Wow. Footprints run crisscross on my soul. I too...Wow. Footprints run crisscross on my soul. I took the haiku form and ran with it to my own purpose expressly for my internet phase of poesy. I write the 5-7-5 form or else sometimes another, 5-7-5 7-7 5-7-5. which I read somewhere was a form used as duelling haikus in teahouses in impromptu performances. I have been writing this way for two years now.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-53886320159663532262010-09-10T15:56:32.488+01:002010-09-10T15:56:32.488+01:00The last line really says a lot about the power of...The last line really says a lot about the power of anger. What a great 55!<br /><br />The haiku is soooooo sad...but very very good!TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-48147183034566182742010-09-10T15:31:55.164+01:002010-09-10T15:31:55.164+01:00Much more simple distinction. A traditional Haiku ...Much more simple distinction. A traditional Haiku usually contains a nature or season word but can be about human activity, whereas a senryu does not but can have word play and satire etc. Given the different syllabic structure of English, the form has taken off in different directions which in turn has influenced the traditional Tanka form( which is longer and more lyrical Haiku for want of better term) to create a more free flowing genre called a Gogyohka. They all draw on the same root,which is to capture concrete 'nowness' and so avoid abstraction and the presence of the author. You should read and feel the same emotions of the event as the writer when done well. One book lists nearly 100 rules for writing a Haiku and 25 different ways of approaching the form, But in reality the great masters said 'learn the rules and then forget them'<br /><br />Yes it is tricky to write out Tarzan's yell so here is the<br /><a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tarzan_yell" rel="nofollow">Yell</a><br /><br />Thanks for reading my <a href="http://ramdom-short-stories.blogspot.com/2010/09/swinging-in-jungle.html" rel="nofollow">Friday 55</a>. Hope your week goes wellJohn (@bookdreamer)https://www.blogger.com/profile/11576434749272275190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-64179464848063470192010-09-10T15:27:42.836+01:002010-09-10T15:27:42.836+01:00Jinksy I love them both. The prose is my favourite...Jinksy I love them both. The prose is my favourite. <br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-88086972994816623102010-09-10T15:06:47.501+01:002010-09-10T15:06:47.501+01:00I said yes, yes, yes
I should have said no, no, no...I said yes, yes, yes<br />I should have said no, no, no<br />I learned the hard wayizzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06379007428464069723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-12831569729516055462010-09-10T14:56:46.635+01:002010-09-10T14:56:46.635+01:00You could reline it! stagger, shorten
break it lik...You could reline it! stagger, shorten<br />break it like toffee -<br />cool- and thanks for visiting!izzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06379007428464069723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-75782497751727128852010-09-10T13:57:22.368+01:002010-09-10T13:57:22.368+01:00A literary debate?
hehehehe...
Hot 55 My Dear!
App...A literary debate?<br />hehehehe...<br />Hot 55 My Dear!<br />Apparantly evoking LOTS of emotion.<br />Thanks for playing "Fine Free" this week<br />Have a Kick Ass Week-End...GG-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-75535796400322914522010-09-10T13:37:22.561+01:002010-09-10T13:37:22.561+01:00Whilst I'm of a vintage that was brought up to...Whilst I'm of a vintage that was brought up to use punctuation and am not an adherent of the current trend, I do not allow it to spoil my enjoyment of other work whatever style or nomenclature may be used. I enjoyed both your pieces, Jinksy.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-74969262747163436032010-09-10T13:14:13.088+01:002010-09-10T13:14:13.088+01:00Just keep writing and let those who will, fight am...Just keep writing and let those who will, fight among themselves!!jabbloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.com