tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post4794115973257101467..comments2024-03-08T11:49:58.622+00:00Comments on Alias Jinksy: Zig-ZagJinksyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-66173694379118757742011-04-17T16:38:33.586+01:002011-04-17T16:38:33.586+01:00Awards for you, thanks for the support!
Bless you...<a href="http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2011/04/12/30-poems-in-30-days-tuesday-thankfulnessalphabe-thursday/" rel="nofollow">Awards for you, thanks for the support!</a><br /><br />Bless your talent. Please join Poetry Potluck W31 today!<br /><br />Happy Sunday!<br /><br />XoxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-1054593893661928842011-04-17T16:38:23.532+01:002011-04-17T16:38:23.532+01:00love it,
I did a zig zg poem for z word challenge...love it,<br /><br />I did a zig zg poem for z word challenge .<br />fun.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-13130413453148464362011-04-16T22:29:13.887+01:002011-04-16T22:29:13.887+01:00Nice one(s) Jinksler!Nice one(s) Jinksler!Totalfeckineejithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05352708391465031655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-2659618849742881632011-04-12T19:53:04.955+01:002011-04-12T19:53:04.955+01:00Brilliant, great idea with the slalom and all the ...Brilliant, great idea with the slalom and all the new realities burnt in through the time line.Niamh Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519443787482685320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-48060371074803464892011-04-12T02:08:16.181+01:002011-04-12T02:08:16.181+01:00Jinksy, I liked your slaloming through life, more ...Jinksy, I liked your slaloming through life, more powerful as a verb than a simile. My thought about first and second drafts is that your second is cleaner, plainer, stronger for what you've carved out of it. I might just be drawn to more direct speech. Good editing, J.Enchanted Oakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14815997287116818456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-2911307081798528102011-04-11T23:50:23.159+01:002011-04-11T23:50:23.159+01:00I kind of like your original best - mostly because...I kind of like your original best - mostly because I love the concept of a NOW I choose to remember. That's just how we're wired, whether we like it or not - all memories are chosen & changed to fit who we are now.The Bughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-28464607855659457632011-04-11T18:39:50.688+01:002011-04-11T18:39:50.688+01:00Everything you write is a joy ... I actually prefe...Everything you write is a joy ... I actually prefer the original version. I think it's the last line that does it for me.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-29486019432120793572011-04-11T17:23:23.294+01:002011-04-11T17:23:23.294+01:00Well just to be awkward, I prefer the second versi...Well just to be awkward, I prefer the second version. Its kind of like branding cattle. I slalom through time is better than I swerve through time like a slalom and I'm not sure about 'realigned' either. The top one flows much better, I think.Peter Gouldinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13292063172122249202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-18780471874555040692011-04-11T14:12:58.986+01:002011-04-11T14:12:58.986+01:00Jeap I'm with Izzy, loved the ending of the or...Jeap I'm with Izzy, loved the ending of the original, but then it weaved into something else equally great. They say you should always keep your first drafts, as it is in them that the core remains! Who knows!Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912071192179983603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-24416316949777938352011-04-11T13:54:50.345+01:002011-04-11T13:54:50.345+01:00Izzy, I think you and I sing in harmony!Izzy, I think you and I sing in harmony!Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-60625902724914942492011-04-11T13:52:38.659+01:002011-04-11T13:52:38.659+01:00I love the ending of the original! (- not that I d...I love the ending of the original! (- not that I don't appreciate your chosen piece) it just sings<br />more to me. Thanks!izzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06379007428464069723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-15878125004397226802011-04-11T13:29:53.458+01:002011-04-11T13:29:53.458+01:00whew love those last 2 lines jinksy...nice play on...whew love those last 2 lines jinksy...nice play on the life line time line...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-72764832981764046462011-04-11T10:53:51.733+01:002011-04-11T10:53:51.733+01:00Stopping to recollect is a wonderful way to move f...Stopping to recollect is a wonderful way to move forward, however jagged the journey.<br /><br />CJ xxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6865161235932309213.post-19881243569979249502011-04-11T10:13:17.245+01:002011-04-11T10:13:17.245+01:00Your language flows beautifully.Your language flows beautifully.Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.com