Saturday, May 3

At The Going Down Of The Sun

Original Image by Penny Smith
Stillness spreads
over the landscape
as evening
stands poised on the horizon
   of another day.

An edit of something I wrote earlier, updated and posted for Poetry Jam.

7 comments:

  1. Beautiful, Jinksy! I love the idea of the evening poised.

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  2. This is lovely! And I agree with Laurie that image really enchanted me :-)

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  3. Penny, your poem and painting are enchanting!

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  4. I'm with Laurie. I love the wording 'evening stands poised on the horizon' - it's perfect.

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  5. 'evening stands poised' perfectly describes the sundown...wonderful lines :)

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  6. This is the sort of feeling one gets when looking at the Eastern horizon during sunset! Lovely...

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