Monday, March 10

Celandines

Five celandines lifted sunshine faces
to me, beaming from the grass by my door.

" Good morning, m'am, and how are you today?"

Their silent voices curtsied old fashioned
greetings across time.
                                        Once, the countryside
was called 'home' by many people - the towns
a farm-cart ride away, beyond blue hills -
and flowers like these would have been well known
to everybody... unremarkable.

But the gloss on the golden petals here
resembles plastic-coated packaging,
as though they have been factory processed
until all their natural beauty has been
overlaid with advertising slogans.

Only expectations and perspectives
have changed since the world was a simpler place,
but those changes have tarnished our vision,
until reality has dimmed, perhaps,
and our yardstick for measuring happiness
has changed too, beyond all recognition.



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11 comments:

  1. You make such a valid statement here, Jinksy. You poem is so well-constructed to take us from that simple beauty to the modern ignorance of such small pleasures as 5 yellow flowers at your doorstep.

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  2. Wow...you've made me feel nostalgic and cynical in just one poem. I'd rather forget about the ad slogans and continue the conversation with the flowers. Very nice work.
    Steve K.

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  3. My thoughts echo both Kerry and Steve's. This is very well done!

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  4. YES! You have expressed it exactly!!!!

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  5. yes! yes. and also, i'm waiting impatiently for those blooms to arrive.

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  6. I think there is much truth in what you've said…and I also think for some of us the simple things still give us great pleasure and really are enough and plenty.

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  7. Rightly so Jinsky! One tends to take short cuts with the fast pace of modern living. Wonderful write!

    Hank

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  8. Wow, starting with pleasure and nostalgia sure can lead to bitterness. Lots is lost. Let's preserve what grace we can.

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  9. An awesome trip with a bittersweet but oh so true look at what we have lost. I too, have been writing such poetry lately and it needs to be heard along with the beautiful Celandines.

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  10. It made me home sick in a good way Thank you

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  11. Sad, but true. The art is in how you captured that truth...caused an emotional reaction in this reader.. Well done. Vb

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