Thursday, April 21

Gift

The locket
lent a glow of love
to her world.
Every time
she fastened its golden clasp
her lips smiled "Thank you!"

Another Shadorma for Writer's Island on Day #21.

13 comments:

  1. Beautiful expression of gratitude.

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  2. Wonderful. I have a necklace like that. I only realised it upon reading your shadorma.

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  3. This poem's a gift. And the artwork's lovely. salute.

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  4. Beautiful little poem. Did you draw the picture?

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  5. Lovely shadorma. One of my favorite forms... says so much but so succintly.

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  6. Lovely poem and picture, Jinksy.

    Pamela

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  7. You can see the pleasure it gives.

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  8. Beautiful Shadorma about a treasured object. I enjoy that form, too. The photo with it is perfect.
    http://judyidliketosay.blogspot.com/2011/04/second-thoughts.html

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  9. I had no idea that you drew the sketch yourself. This is beautiful. You are an artist in so many different forms!

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  10. It's the little things in life that make the difference. Lovely!

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  11. You have mastered the shadorma form. Beautiful.

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  12. Exquisite! I must try this form. I hope I can write something nearly as beautiful as this.

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  13. Wonderful drawing and poem expressing love and gratitude.

    Elizabeth

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