Thursday, April 14

#14

 
Silk ribbon river;
moon-boat sails with star cargo,
highlights spring blossom.


For today's Freewrite at Writer's Island, as well as One Shot Wednesday.

18 comments:

  1. I like 'star cargo. There's something very appealing about the word 'cargo' - the hint of something exotic. Daft, I know!

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  2. Jabblog-
    As I used the word (!) I don’t think it’s daft at all! It has overtones of exotic spices and treasures being transported around the globe on romantic sail boats or steamships of long ago...

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  3. Lovely. Three lines that come together in the reader's (and, no doubt, the poet's) mind.

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  4. Perfect description of a beautiful time and place.

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  5. I don't see my post so I'll try again and hope it doesn't show up twice. This is an exquisite poem!

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  6. I like "star cargo" too--something delicate that needed transport.
    Lovely haiku.

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  7. Invite you to share your poetry with our poetry potluck today,
    Random poems, poems unrelated to our theme are welcome!

    Hope to see you in.
    Bless your talent.
    Cheers.
    xxx

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  8. the imagery is stunning.

    A++

    Thanks for linking.

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  9. So enjoy the quiet feel of nature in this: serene and peaceful!

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  10. I'm there..love when I can tag along!! lovely..

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  11. welcoming spring hmmmm wonders of the seasons!! :)http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/

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  12. Serene indeed!
    I loved it for its imagery.. :)

    (I just killed my own comment- so doing it again!)
    Springing Hugs xx

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  13. good job! my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/22/springtide/

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  14. very beautiful!


    Luna

    http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/

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