Monday, November 8

Microfiction Monday # 56

Young feet walk the path;
life and lane stretch out ahead.
To where will they lead?

The final destinations
remain in the arms of Time.






My Tanka today is in response to this delightful photo prompt at Stony River.

14 comments:

  1. I like the personification of Time, a companion.

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  2. So very true.
    By the way, your links aren't working on MM.

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  3. I love the contemplative mood of this, perfect for the peacefulness of the scene.

    Btw, I got here by going to your home page first. Anthony is right, the links aren't working. Hope you figure it out. :)

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  4. Thanks people - I know the links were duff, but I have finally made one work in the comments section on Stony River. :)

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  5. So true...Her walk down the leaf=strewn road echoes her walk through life.

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  6. Nice one! Walking in to the future!

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  7. What a wonderful take with this one. I love your reference to Father Time...How true.

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  8. A sparkling Tanka, to be sure!

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  9. Another philosophical reaction to this prompt - rather poignant.

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  10. Love the humaness of time that you have shared... philosophical reactions run deep with this one.

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  11. I LOVE it!!! Simply beautiful!! Just stopping by to see my favorite AF twin...to let her know she's in my thoughts ;-)) Love you! Janine XO

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  12. Very evocative MM. Makes us realize that no-one can predict our future...only Time will tell what happens.
    Have a great week. Cheers.

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